A Renga is shared writing, a collective creative experience open to all. It originated in Japan over one thousand years ago.
It is a poem made up of short linked verses written by a group of people. Rather than telling a story in a traditional way, a renga aims to create a scattering of images with different moods and tones – a wide-ranging portrait of contemporary life and our relationship with the natural world. In 2016, we wrote a twelve-verse Shisan renga written one verse at a time over the course of an afternoon.
We created a schema to guide us, giving themes for each verse. The verses are alternatively two line and three lines long and are usually written in the present tense.
Renga verses tend to spring from the immediacy of sensation and perception rather than containing overt metaphors or lengthy descriptions.
At the beginning of each round the master poet proposed the theme for that verse. Participants then had 10 minutes or so to come up with a verse responding to the theme or could choose to disregard the theme altogether!
The verses were read out and the master poet, often alongside the other participants, chose the verse that fitted best with what has gone before and moved the poem on to a new place. There was time for discussion, laughter and tea!
Copyright is shared by the contributors & Fruit Routes.
Afterwards, there was a group reading of the poem with wild tea & scones.
The schema was created by Paul Conneally with Anne-Marie Culhane. The host poets were Kerry Featherstone, Lecturer in Creative Writing, Loughborough University and Paul Conneally.
Fruit Routes Renga Schema – A Shisan Renga
- Summer
- Non Seasonal
- Non Seasonal
- Autumn Moon
- Autumn +
- Non Seasonal
Break for a tea
- Winter
- Non Seasonal (love)
- Non Seasonal +
- Spring
- Spring (blossom)
- Non Seasonal
The Poem
A Gang of Lambs
is it work, soft in the sunshine?
even the grass
has been cut for us
a figure in the distance
carrying yellow
the luminous top
of a girl who walks and shares
the light of the day
there are more moons out there
than many care to see
reaching over the wall
Annie Elizabeth her limbs
spotted with lichen
a wood turner
shopping for perfume
the first frost
sees off the last
of dad’s dahlias
bees taking turns
to keep the hive warm
between footrise
and footfall
everything changes
a gang of lambs stray
on Hope Forest Moor
moving fast
cherry blossom petals
on a car windscreen
the boy heads home
a smile on his face
Participants
Ami
Jack
John Knight
Steve King
Alison Lloyd
Zoe Petersen
Fanny Naccache
Kadhijeto Ahmed
Adit Patel
Estelle Kugler
Kay D Parker
Cecilia Walanga
Anne Kristin
Ruth Sinclair
Kieran Bjergstrom
Suella Postles
Jo Shields
Little Onion
Anne-Marie Culhane
Kerry Featherstone
Wenjun Tang
Phyllis Echo
Paulo Milazzo
Mahek Mehta
Michelle Richey
Abigail Monger